The
Forty-Minute Author Attitude
Tone, POV, or Test Essay:
STEP 1: Check each item listed below which accurately
de-
scribes the positive aspects of the essay being graded. Add
one point for each item checked from the list. This side de-
scribes the basic requirements for a well-written essay. (Grader
one should check column one. Grader two should check col-
umn two):
___-___1. The writer demonstrates an understanding of the
author's (speaker's or character's) complex attitude.
___-___2. The writer analyzes how rhetorical or stylistic de-
vices listed in the question or used in the passage distinguish
the complexity of the author's (speaker's or character's) atti-
tude.
___-___3. The writer offers a convincing interpretation of
the
meaning and significance of the passage.
.
___-___4. The writer's use of quotes shows an appreciation
of
the author's style.
___-___5. The writer's explanations of the evidence are clear,
concise and consistent with the meaning of the passage.
___-___6. The writer supports the discussion of each
language
device with apt and specific references to the text.
___-___7. The diction and sentence structure of this essay
com-
municate a clear message.
___-___8. The implicit organization of this essay aids
in com-
municating a clear message.
___-___9. The grammar aids in communicating a clear message.
MAXIMUM SCORE RESULTS: Grader 1 ________
MAXIMUM SCORE RESULTS: Grader
2 ________
STEP 2: Check each item below which accurately describes
the negative aspects of the essay being graded. This side
de-
scribes how the essay may not be as good as the higher-scor-
ing essays. (Grader one should check column one. Grader
two should check column two):
___-___1. The writer's discussion of the author's (speaker's
or
character's) complex view is less incisive than those of the high-
est scoring essays.
___-___2. The writer discusses the rhetorical and stylistic
de-
vices with limited purpose or accuracy.
___-___3. The writer's interpretation of the passage may be
vague or pedestrian or incorrect.
___-___4. The writer's use of quotes is awkward, inappropri-
ate, or uninteresting.
___-___5. The writer simply catalogues the rhetorical or stylis-
tic devices without relating them to the creation of the author's
(Speaker's or character's) attitude.
___-___6. Although adequate in quantity, the evidence in this
writer is not as thorough, precise, or convincing as the top-
scoring essays.
___-___7. Distracting errors in diction or syntax make the
message unclear.
___-___8. The organization of this essay is less appropriate
than those of the top-scoring essays.
___-___9. The writer makes consistent errors in grammar and/
or other basic elements of composition.
RESULTS:
Grader 1: ________________ - ___________ = ___________
Step 1 Score
Step 2 Score
Grader 2: ________________ - ___________ = ___________
Step 1 Score
Step 2 Score
Grader 1 Score + Grader 2 Score = _______
Above sum divided by 2 = Score for essay
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